Thursday, October 10, 2019
Murderer – creative writing
It was an exquisite day. A 15-year-old boy called Tom who is in year 11 at Charlton high school. Tom is a skinny boy with brown hair and blue eyes. Tom walks to school every school day. As Tom walked he thought back at the day he had yesterday. ââ¬Å"It wasn't badâ⬠Tom said to himself. But there is always something in your self, which says opposite to whatever you say or do. It's of course your mind and it said ââ¬Å"No you didn't you had an awful day yesterday. You killed a man!â⬠Yes, Tom did kill a man and he is called Mr.Diver. It's not because he wanted to kill him it's because he had to if he want to see his mum and dad together. He wanted his mum and dad together since they divorced. They divorced when Tom was very little so he doesn't have that much memory of his mum and dad together. Mr.Diver is Tom's mum's future husband. Tom hated Mr.Diver since he first met him. Mr.Diver is a fat man with hardly any neck. Mr.Diver is a bus driver. If you ask Tom what is his favourite day is he would say Friday because that is the day Tom meets his dad. Mr.Newton is his dad and there is a big difference between Mr.Newton and Mr.Diver maybe this is the reason why Tom hates Mr.Diver. Mr.Newton is a skinny man with long neck. Normally Tom and his dad spend Friday afternoons either playing football or go to a restaurant. In restaurant they talk about what happened during the week. Since Tom heard that his mum is going to marry Mr.Diver he thought he must stop this marriage if he doesn't his dreams will be shattered. So he planned to kill Mr.Diver. He came up with a brilliant plan. The plan was to kill Mr.Diver when he comes around Tom's house. But there shouldn't be anyone in Tom's house apart from Tom and Mr.Diver. The day came when Tom's mother told Tom and Mr.Diver that they have to stay alone. That night Tom made a plan that he is going to stab Mr.Diver and he kept things normal as possible. He didn't make sudden movements or speak to Mr.Diver too much because he never speaks to Mr.Diver normally. Tom kept penknives in his pocket and waited for exact moment to come. The moment came when Mr.Diver asked Tom if he want something to eat? Tom thought that when Mr.Diver is preparing the food he could go behind him and stab him. ââ¬Å"Do you want anything to eat Tom?â⬠asked Mr.Diver again. ââ¬Å"Can I have a sandwich please?â⬠said Tom. ââ¬Å"I'll make one quickly,â⬠said Mr.Diver. When Mr.Diver went to the kitchen to make a sandwich Tom went quietly behind him. Tom stopped near the kitchen door for a few seconds and took two penknives out. Tom saw that Mr.Diver is showing his back to him so Tom seized the chance and walked behind Mr.Diver and stabbed him once in the back and once in the neck. Tom put the body in Mr.Diver's car, which was a bit far away from Tom's house so it would look like when Mr.Diver got on the car someone stabbed him. When his mum Tom said nothing he just watched TV. ââ¬Å"Where's Mr.Diver?â⬠asked Tom's mum. ââ¬Å"Oh he left already,â⬠said Tom. ââ¬Å"You should go to bed,â⬠said Tom's mum. ââ¬Å"Why what is the time?â⬠asked Tom. He wants to keep things as normal as possible. ââ¬Å"It's ten,â⬠said Tom's mum. ââ¬Å"Ok,â⬠said Tom. At school Tom didn't concentrate on anything apart from Mr.Diver. He wanted to find out if the police had found it out. Third lesson the receptionist came and asked Tom to take his things and come with her and Tom knew that it was about Mr.Diver. His mum was in the reception and she said Tom to come with her and tom asked why and she said that she'd tell him on the way. ââ¬Å"Why did you come to the school? What's wrong? ââ¬Å"Mr.Diver is dead,â⬠said Tom's mum ââ¬Å"Who did a such a terrible thing?â⬠asked Tom. ââ¬Å"That's what police trying to find out. He was found in his car stabbed and the police things that someone tried to steal his car and didn't succeed so they killed him,â⬠said Tom's mum. Tom was about to ask why didn't they take the car but he thought better leave it. When he and his mum came to their house they saw that the police was in. ââ¬Å"Don't worry they just taking photos of the scene,â⬠said Tom's mum. Tom now felt that his next step was to tell his father what happened and say to him that he should speak to Tom's mum and tell her exactly what happened and the reason for Tom to kill Mr.Diver and Tom believed by this his mum and dad would come together. The following Friday Tom met his dad and his dad asked him what happened to Mr.Diver and Tom told him exactly what happened and told him to say to his mum. His dad told him that he will talk to her and advised him to don't kill any one again. The following day when Tom woke up he saw that his dad was with his mum and his mum was crying and asked Tom ââ¬Å"Why did you do this? You should've told me that you don't like Mr.Diver and you shouldn't have killed Mr.Diverâ⬠â⬠I'm sorry mum,â⬠said Tom ââ¬Å"Now on we'll forget what happened in the past and thing of what will happen in future,â⬠said Tom's dad.
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